My dress
is blue
Not as blue
as the sky
The sky
is big
Bigger
than my backyard
The
backyard is fenced in
Not like the horizontally
The
backyard is green
Look
like the grass
The grass
is so fresh
As like
the a new baby come to the world
It’s
really nice to welcome the spring.
the ending of your poem is as refreshing as the grass you compared it to. Everyone enjoys a new born child and everyone enjoy the first day of spring both are warm and welcoming.I think your choice of words gave me a vivid image of what your poem is talking about.( second line last stanza you have to fix the grammar)
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